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Resending of my IMSISS Motivation Letter for Final Review

NEW - Essay Prompt:(600 word counts) 1.What is your main motivation for applying to the IMSISS postgraduate degree? 2.How will...

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It Starts with Small Act toward Bigger Impact (Erasmus Mundus: GLOCAL - Track I)

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Personal Statement for Erasmus Mundus Joint Master IMSISS Programme

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Motivation Letter for Stipendium Hungaricum Scholarship - OTM General Medicine, University of Pécs

3 - @Holt I truly appreciate the feedback. I'll try to revise and repost it. Thank you again!...

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Motivation Letter for Stipendium Hungaricum Scholarship- Computer Science MSc

2 - Paragraph number 4 directly address the national need for a person of your skills but fails to explain how...

Lettersxeon39 - Dec 31, 2025Holt - 2 days ago

IELTS WRITING - Transportation of products and people cause the most pollution worldwide

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Success as a solitary achievement: Common App (Personal Statement)

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IELTS WRITING TASK 2 Employers should give their staff at least a 4-week holiday

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Motivation letter for Erasmus Mundus Joint Masters in Imaging

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ERASMUS MUNDUS INT'L MASTERS IN GLOBAL MARKETS AND LOCAL CREATIVES: GLOBAL MARKETS & DEVELOPMENT

2 - This is the information that the reviewer will be looking for. You started with some pretty irrelevant information...

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Motivation for CYBERSURE - Master's programme in Cybersecurity and Assurance

2 - There is no such committee. There is only a general admissions committee that considers all of the applicants...

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Motivation Letter for Stipendium Hungaricum Scholarship, Msc in Autonomous Vehicle Control Engineer

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Personal Statement for Erasmus Mundus Joint Master IMSISS Programme

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Seek your inputs-Statement of Purpose-Erasmus Mundus GLOCAL-Sustainable Business Development

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How Fashion Reflects Personality and Confidence

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IELTS WRITING TASK 2 sample about success and the drivers behind it

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The gender distribution of educators in the UK - BAR CHART - IELTS WRITING TASK 1 REPORT

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I like to Gamble - Common Application Essay Help

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Personal Statement Letter for IMSISS with ERASMUS MUNDUS / Strategic assessments

4 - The reviewers prefer that the personal statements lean more towards the reflective and pondering side of the applicant. That...

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This is my Motivation letter for UvA can someone tell me if it good and what changes i can do

2 - The tone being used in this essay is too informal. Almost AI like in tone and writing content. While...

GraduatePunitj - Dec 27, 2025Holt - Dec 27, 2025

Fashion Design major - PERSONAL STATEMENT FOR KGSP/GKS

3 - Thank you so much I really appreciate your help. I'll fix my personal statement....

Scholarshipnorceulea - Dec 24, 2025norceulea - Dec 27, 2025

Personal statement for IMSISS

2 - A personal statement is not the same as a motivation essay. Therefore, the minute the reviewer read these...

GraduateBelieve4580 - Dec 24, 2025Holt - Dec 27, 2025

Do you think public transportation should be free for everyone

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